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:iconwintaamero:
No deviation in a long time, eh...
Been quite addicted to Touhou spin-offs lately. Most especially Touhou DotA (or DotS). Interesting stuff.

The hair's a bit too big, though. D:
Not the head; the hair.
I think I've been drawing too much moe-tan.

Fmeh... might scrap it after a while if I get bored. :{

Reisen Undongein Inaba, Touhou and all related material (c) ZUN

[UPDATE]: Scrapped. Obvious reasons, really.
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:icongrstdo:
O.O.....(speechles)...btw i have sore eyes XD
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:iconflandres-agent:
She's firing her laser.
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:iconeonaiariasovai:
I'm assuming that's a laser. If so, from what I've understood after countless of games that involve light cutting through crap, it doesn't spread a whole lot. A bit more lens flare on the beam origin would have been good too.

Right leg looks odd.

Shading seems to ignore that there's a light source coming from the finger. *Points toward the hair at the back of her neck*
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~wintaamero Oct 11, 2010  Student General Artist
Answering in the respective order,
Her danmaku bullets (the projectile she fires) in-game are really huge bullets covered in weak light; not lasers.

How so? Too thin?

Huh, quite true, but see, I only focused the light near where that red flash in the background was. Didn't want it too strong because, again it's not a laser per se.

Thanks for the critique, though.
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:iconeonaiariasovai:
Leg should be a noticeable deal smaller considering it's farther away from the viewer. Even if her torso was twisted in such a way that the legs were even-ish, I don't think it would look like that, especially with the leg raised.

When you consider the recoil of a projectile too, she'd be pushed backward, so the legs would be spreading open to sustain the kickback.
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~wintaamero Oct 12, 2010  Student General Artist
Basic proportions:
Shoulder-to-elbow length = thigh length and knee-to-ankle length.

As for recoil, though true, I suggest you look at Touhou 10.5 or 12.3 gameplay first. Being realistic is not necessarily a good thing in fan art. Sometimes, what is considered real is what is canonically true.
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